Dance with Me
(just one slow waltz)
My love,
Take my shaking hand
And dance with me
For good times’ sake
Wrap your arms
Around my quivering body
And glide with me
In a sensual rhythm
Allow your heart sing
One last serenade
With mine
Taste a final poem
From my lips
And let me breathe you in
Once more
Let’s close
This unfinished chapter
With whispers
That only we
Can hear
Let’s celebrate us
Until
It is time to change
Companion
Please
Dance with me
Just one
Slow
Waltz
© Noora (2012)
Such eloquence in your words. This one I absolutely loved, Noora!
I see a beautiful plea dancing between two souls belonging to one tune.
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Your words had me in tears. Thank you, so much, for taking the time to read and feel my work. I appreciate it more than you know.
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How can one ‘not feel’ the depths with which you have penned this? Its beautiful and honest to the very core. Keep pennoned dear Noora!
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I remember writing this like it was yesterday. My heart was still longing to be heard and hoping to gain some closure or guidance for the new journey.
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Reblogged this on Echoes and Reflections and commented:
Re-blogging one of my very first posts. A poem I was working on last night reminded me of this piece. I’ll be back to post and read soon. Please bear with me 🙂 Hope you’re all having a fantastic week. – Noora
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it is amazing how poetry speaks to every single person – sometimes it makes you smile, sometimes it makes stop in the middle of reading as it reminds you of something painful, sometimes you just don’t get it and sometimes you get it so deeply that it touches every string of your soul.
beautiful…
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… it IS amazing! It is also always so incredible and inspiring to know that my words have either touched or inspired someone. What more could I ask for!? Thank you so much for reading and leaving your thoughts, Dace! I always look forward to your inspirational posts.
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ALAS…the magic is ending. How come my past loves have never ended like this? Beauty and pathos all in one poem! 🙂
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Ha ha… thank you for reading, Jonathan. Thanks also for the re-blog and follow – both greatly appreciated.
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This is so beautiful. So sad but in a lovely way. The one last dance – when two people know it must end – a final goodbye. This brought tears to my eyes.
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… and I am touched to know my words touched your heart, K!
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Noora, this is so pure!
Just an honest request, that plea that comes from our very core for those “one last” things.
I felt every word..felt the longing.. the apprehension..the reluctance to let go!
Its fantastic!
~Much Love,
M
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Glad to know you felt my words, M! Much love and smiles to you. xx
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This poem hits home. Your voice is beautiful and very recognizable. Just out of curiosity, do you have any dark poetry?
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Thank you so much, Kimberly. What do you mean by “dark”? I have written some “painful” poems but they are quiet, not loud. I haven’t shared them anywhere.
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so nice 🙂
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Thank you!!
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Wonderful. Then let us glide in 3/4 time —–Chagall
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Glad you enjoyed.
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Wow. This one really hit home for me. It just drew me straight back into a memory…powerful piece!
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Thank you so much for reading and leaving your thoughts, Moses. Glad you liked my poem.
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…. your words were music Noora, played and moved me … thank you …now I require a tissue….wipe the tears away…. then another chance, to dance a romance x
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Thank you for reading and writing a comment. It is always so rewarding to know that my poem has touched another heart. Have a great week, Ali.
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You have such an elegant way of penning down your thoughts….So Beautiful ! artistic !
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Thank you. Your words made my heart smile. 🙂
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This is awesome 🙂 Keep smiling !
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