Come,
walk with me
where the wildflowers bloom
Lie beside me
beneath the irresistible sky
point out the constellations
you wish to fly to
and I will take you there –
the star chart is printed
on your skin
I will trace my fingertips
intimately
across the beauty
I read like braille
pausing
at the loveliest places
in order the forget
the world
but never you
Love,
until the wildflowers begin to wither
in summer’s farewell
Come,
walk with me
to where all our journeys end.
Bless your sense of intimacy and overflowing heart, the beauty that flows from your heart as naturally as the sun gives light.
To have walked that road is to have become that source where all begin and end, from whence all overflow.
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I’m touched by your lovely comment. Thank you for always stopping by to listen to my heart’s whispers.
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Lie beside me
Beneath the irresistible sky
Noora, what a delicious image this is,’ the irresistible sky’
and then tracing your fingertips across the star chart….
and that could we all spend an infinite time with our lovers.
just beautiful poetry, ty.
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Thank you!! You’re such a loyal reader of mine. I appreciate your time and thoughts so much.
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Noora, wherever you write, i will be there to read. reading these words unlocked mine, i was having trouble beginning a poem the other day and this poem sparked some images that i needed. just wanted you to know, ty.
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Beautiful!I really felt like I was invited to a wonderfull place, where sentiments live with honesty,passion and rawnes and I would’ve gladly went there without looking back. Gorgeous imagery and metaphors!
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So glad you felt the “Invitation”, Oloriel. I am humbled by your feedback – as always. x
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I will trace my fingertips
Intimately
Across the beauty
I read like braille
Pausing
At the loveliest places
In order to forget
The world
But never you
Superb! The way you write and feel is so unique
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… just my heart’s voice – nothing more, nothing less. Thank you, Kimberly, for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it.
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I agree – ‘Beneath the irresistible sky…’ – so beautiful.
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Thank you, Frank! 🙂
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I can only reiterate what others have said, this is beautiful! 🙂
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Thank you so much – glad you enjoyed!
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such poised sensuality and charm in your words, reading this was a pure delight!
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Thank you, beautiful poet! It means a lot coming from you.
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Love the imagery…skin, Braille…just lovely.
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Thank you for reading – so thrilled to know you enjoyed it.
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Sensual masterpiece. Who is she???? 🙂
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🙂 thank you for reading!
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Absolutely gorgeous in its imagery. I loved it! 🙂
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Thank you, Skye! xx
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You are very welcome!
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Noora – simply beautiful
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Thank you, Deb!! So glad you enjoyed.
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Beautifully…I accept the invitation.
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🙂 Thank you for reading! I’m so happy to know you enjoyed this piece.
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A fine unfolding
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Thank you, Michael!
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It is within the context of attention and appreciation our innate genius emerges. You deserve it.
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Perfectly lovely, a real joy to read!! 🙂
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Thank you so much, dear Helen.
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I’ve nominated you for the Liebster Award. Take a look here http://ambitioninthecity.com/2013/09/10/liebster-award-spreading-the-love/
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Oh wow. 🙂 Thank you so much for the nomination, I truly appreciate it. Have a great day. – Noora
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You are very welcome. Love you stuff.
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i love the airey concept of this and the imagery of the map of the stars being on someones skin and the infinity of that :0
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Thank you, Ana! That is a lovely compliment coming from such a wonderful poet as yourself.
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Reblogged this on Echoes and Reflections and commented:
It’s reblog Sunday, right? I’m hoping to post a new poem next week. Now I’m off to enjoy your poems and other posts! P.S. Please, click on “view original” – thank you!!! 🙂
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How truly lovely… ❤
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…. your feedback means a lot, Julie! Thank you so much for reading. Glad you enjoyed. Have a wonderful week.
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Thanks Noora, you too!
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A beautiful poem.I liked the kind and gentle tone and thoughts in the words.
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Thank you. I really appreciate your feedback, John. I’m glad you enjoyed the “Invitation”.
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You are welcome.
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
A amazing poem and poet. Please read and enjoy.
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Thank you so much for sharing my words with your followers, John! I appreciate it greatly. Have a wonderful week.
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You are welcome.
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I’ve read a pure romantic poem after such a long time. So lovely, Noora!
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Entrancing bewitching beguiling
Subliminal symbolism seduces the senses
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So very lovely Noora! 🙂 ❤
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