Perfectly Still
The day
Refuses to die
Evening birds
Quietly comfort
The wordless sky
Bittersweet concerto
Inspires me
To write
My own
But some poems
Are better left
Unwritten
The day
Refuses to die
Raindrops lie
On sleepy flowers
Perfectly still
Like sorrow
Almost forgotten
© Noora (2015)
Photograph © Teija Härmäaho / moodphoto.
Teija is a close friend of mine and fills my world with endless inspiration. Her photography is pure poetry – without words.
Yes I do believe “some poems are better left unwritten” because they convey a lot!
Thanks and regards Noora 🙂
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment my work!! Love & inspiration.
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so lovely!
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Thank you so much for reading, Holly!! Love & inspiration.
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my pleasure!
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SAo happy to see a writing of your, Noora! Your poem, combined with the photograph you chose to share together with it, gave me an illusion of our dreams, whatever they may be, refusing to stop dreaming.
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And I was so happy to notice your comment, Oloriel! Love your interpretation of this short piece. 😉 Sending love and inspiration your way.
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Perfect place and thoughts shared. A amazing poem.
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Thank you for your kind words – means a lot!
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Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Amazing poetry by a talented writer. Please read and enjoy.
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I appreciate your re-blog a lot. Thank you so much, John!
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Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
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That first stanza is so beautiful. I also like the coy, wavering hope that will hopefully win out. =)
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… hope is a stubborn force. It dies slowly – even if the mind has given up long ago. Thank you for your comment! Sending love and inspiration your way.
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Beautifully put, dear Noora… ” But some poems/ Are better left/ Unwritten”… I love those verses… I guess that most times what we truly feel, is left unsaid… maybe the same thing happens with written words… such as here… Sending love and best wishes. Aquileana 😀
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It’s ironic that I wrote those lines, because I’ve always said that everything in this life is worth writing about… perhaps that poem wasn’t. Ha ha. Thank you so much for reading and posting a comment, sweetie. It’s always intriguing to read your thoughts. Have a wonderful weekend. ❤
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Lovely, serene, magnificent. 😀
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You’re too kind, Eva! Thank you so much. ❤
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My pleasure!! 🙂
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Just beautiful, Noora. I read your words several times to get the “full feel” of what you described here. Welcome back to WP and may you keep on writing your glorious poetry. Have a wonderful weekend!! !<3
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Thank you so much for taking the time to feel this piece, Amy Rose. I appreciate your comment very much. Love, light and inspiration. Always. ❤
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Lovely words, Noora. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Celestine! Love & inspiration.
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Lovely poem Noora and what a treat to come back on WP to find this , I especially love the lines
“Some poems
Are better left
Unwritten. ”
Just beautiful. Anyway nice to see back on WP. Have a lovely weekend
x
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Thank you so much – means a lot coming from a wonderful poet like you!! Sending love and inspiration your way, Finn!
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And like wise to you x
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Great piece. Well written.
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Thank you so much for taking the time to read & comment, WB!
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Wonderful poem and image! Will go to check her photography!
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Thank you so much, Tiny! Teija’s photography is stunning. I absolutely love her artistic sensitivity. Have a great weekend!
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So beautiful…words and photo! I also love how your blog looks…love the wrinkled paper background 😉
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Thanks, Lorrie! Glad you enjoyed. The photograph is truly one of my favorite captures from her. Happy to know you like the background too… 🙂 Have a great weekend!!
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You too, Noora ❤
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Beautiful, as always, my beautiful friend ❤
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… means a lot coming from you, Julie! Big hugs to you and little N! ❤
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Very beautiful poem and imagery. Perfect combo of loveliness. ❤️
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This is beautiful, Noora! ❤
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Thank you Josslyn! I appreciate your comment a lot.
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❤
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I love this, so beautiful and descriptive! Lovely!!!!
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Thank you so very much, Sasha! Love, peace & inspiration.
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Like sorrow almost forgotten…dreamy like the picture. Both beautiful.
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Happy to know you enjoyed, Anita!
Teija’s photography is very dreamy and heartfelt. I’m a big fan of her style.
“Perfectly still / like sorrow / almost forgotten” were the first lines I had in my mind when I started writing this one.
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Cool. It is nice to be inspired, and nicer when you are connected, I think.
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Beautiful….☺🙂🤗😗
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The unwritten still seems to stay in the brain, but after the years I often find there are pieces that can then be written 🙂
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A beautiful poem!
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